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Welcome!

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1) You have just entered my domain. Here you will see what I see and know what I know. This web site includes everything from likes and dislikes to past events and future plans. Visitors will learn much about me, but will also learn much about them self. My site consists of poems, journals, and essays, written for my English class. Each piece of writing expresses my feelings and/or thoughts on the subject I wrote about. The text will state and explain my views.

Throughout the creation of these select writing compositions I had trouble. Finding a clear way to write my thoughts on paper was no easy task. In my Family Story essay it was hard for me to explain my thoughts and remember the details of what exactly went on and happened. On the flip side once I started writing I began to etch within a groove. Meaning my story and constant rate of writing began to flow at a continuous tempo. When I was in this mode my skills became immensely greater. Through these pieces you will see how I transitioned from not writing in this mode to present, of which I do. I am proud of all the written works on this site. Each one I have spent numerous nights working on and altering to create a piece that was written to the best of my abilities. ENJOI!  :)     

2)PoEmS

 

            Da BEach 

"I Walk Inside Myself"                                                           

 

I walk into myself and find

A warm day that could become cold

Soft sand, rocks hidhing with in

Secrets from below

Calm or choppy you will never know

Put all these things together and what do you get

There is a beach in side, you want to bet

Day, night and morning

Tides, low and high

I am a beach inside

 

           Marin Culture Pie

                                                                                                                       

KIDS:

1 of your parent’s old, but new cars

2 12 inch subs to bump the bass

A radar detector from letting the cops put you in your place

50 dollar bills for allowance should do

And a dad for a lawyer is good too

After made, put in oven

One big room

The biggest one in the house

Now to add the whip cream after crispy edges

A full ride to any high school and college

This is after you add the 2.0 GPA

All together what do you get?

The perfect Marin child pie

 

 

PARENTS:

You first must “snob” your child up at an early age

Too much age can be bad

Now this child is the only one you can have

It must be spoiled

Add 3 crashed cars

Then find your cute one, under aged, in a bar

Take the drugs from thier room, you must add those

All together what do you get?

A Marin family pie

 

My Dad

(I am the Son of…)

 

I am the son of something more French then a baguette

He is a city of Atlantis

Mysterious and full of secrets

unexplored, almost non-existent

My dad works for the CIA

 

Older Brothers

(Forgiveness Poem)

 

I have used my will to forgive

The person I know the best]

Stealing my things, but even more

Annoying me, but even more

You did much more

 

These things you have done

Belong in the land

The land of no morals

But we

Yes we do not live there

 

You have taken object without permission

You have destroyed me, but even more

Turned me to rage, but even more

Most of all you left me with no example

 

I have used my will to forgive

And I have used it for you

 

 

 

 

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